Saturday, December 8, 2012

Personal Statement

A personal statement that I wrote for my English 1A class at Berkeley City College. This paper really helped me understand myself and my interests:


A Universe of Possibilities
            The universe began as a single hot, dense state billion years ago. There were no solar systems, no stars, no planets, and there were no human beings. Through a process known as the “Big Bang,” the universe suddenly expanded. Things that had never existed until that very moment, such as electrons and nuclei, unexpectedly formed. Even now the universe continues to expand infinitely. Similarly, I think of myself as what many physicists think of the universe: full of unexpected surprises with no definite direction. From the time I was an elementary student to the time I graduated middle school, my answer to the question, “What do you want to be when you grow up,” has never been absolute. I have always lived in the moment, never thinking about the future. From one day to the next my goals can change just like the stocks on Wall Street: on Tuesday I might want to become a professional basketball player; Wednesday, a lawyer; Thursday, the President of the United States. Though I may set a goal for myself, I cannot yet put a definite statement on whom or what I will become. What I can do, however, is try my best no matter what obstacles may stand before me.
            It was a sweltering summer’s day in Guangzhou, China. I was only seven years old. My family and I were visiting our relatives, my Aunt and grandmother on my father’s side. We had just landed at the airport after a nearly 13 hour-long flight. As we made our way from the airport to my grandmothers’ apartment, I couldn’t help but notice dozens of crippled men, women, and children kneeling on every street corner begging for spare change. Among them, I noticed several children that had horrifically disfigured bodies and little-to-no clothing on. “What happened to them,” I asked my mother in Chinese, “They are younger than me!” As we walked by, one of the children lifted his wooden bowl, pleading for anything we could spare him. “I’m not sure, but I hear rumors that their family’s owed money that they did not repay, so this is how they are punished,” she answered, as she shifted through her purse for some bills to give to the child, “Here, give this to him.” I dropped the bills into his bowl, only to see it be given to a group of men that had been keeping watch over the beggars. At that moment, I was infuriated. I longed to be a cop who had the power to arrest and punish these petty criminals who took advantage of kids. But I couldn’t. Our family arrived at my grandmothers’ apartment twenty minutes later; the adults hugged, gossiped, and drank green tea. My brother and I followed my twelve-year old cousin, Sam, to the park. I had never played basketball before, but after two hours, I was having so much fun that I had forgotten all about the children who were forced to beg for gangs. We went home after playing several pickup games against Sam’s schoolmates, relaxed by the television and watched the NBA Playoffs. “Did you know these guys make millions of dollars each year just to play basketball?” Sam inquired in Chinese. “I would give anything for that, wouldn’t you?” ‘Of course I would,’ I thought to myself.  And just like that, I had changed from wanting to be a cop to protect others, to longing to become a professional basketball player.
Even though I still play basketball recreationally, I have given up on becoming a professional. Right now, my goal is to study astrophysics at UC Berkeley. I first became drawn to Astrophysics during the summer of 2011, when I participated in a Cosmology and Physics workshop in the Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory at the University of California, Berkeley. During this week-and-a-half long workshop I received lectures on topics such as Supernovae, the Big Bang, the Large Hadron Collider (LHC), and Dark Matter from numerous professors, graduate students, and researchers including George Smoot, Nao Suzuki, and Peter Nugent. I remember during one such lecture, a student and a teacher were in a heated debate about what came before the Big Bang. The teacher tried to explain, “Before the Big Bang, scientists theorize that the universe was a small “ball”, if you will, of nothing that just suddenly exploded and expanded into what it is now. That’s the beginning of the universe!” To which the student argued, “How can a “small ball of nothing” create all of THIS? It just isn’t logical!” Eventually the debate would simmer down, and the lecture would continue as if nothing had happened. But to me, that was the most fascinating part of the workshop and it is what truly fueled my passion. Being able to openly debate with scientists who had established themselves as prominent researchers, all of whom have made significant discoveries, gave me an opportunity to express my thoughts as well as receive feedback from the best in the field! One of the exciting moments of the workshop was during an activity day. Groups of 4 students were assigned and each group was given a hand-held cosmic ray detector –In a previous lecture we learned that Earth is constantly bombarded by millions upon billions of cosmic rays every second, but few of them ever make it past our atmosphere. Those that do travel through everything in their paths, you, me, even cement!-and were given the task of going around campus to test differences in cosmic ray levels and how elevation effected it. Being able to use tools, albeit miniature versions, of what researchers use was amazing!
In the week and a half that I spent going to the workshop, everything else in my life came to a halt. The Hunger Games lay, covered in dust, at the corner of my desk, replaced by Stephen Hawking’s A Brief History of Time and anything else related to Physics I could get my hands on. What was once just an interesting topic had become an obsession. I was completely immersed in the creation, development, and evolution of the universe. Long after the terrific lectures and group activities and the workshops had ended, I continued my research online, following every article about the LHC, or CERN’s Large Hadron Collider. I was anxious to be the first to learn about a new, groundbreaking discovery. Not only that, I hoped that one day I would be the one making new discoveries and inspiring the next generation of children to do the same.
For that reason, I am now attending Berkeley City College in order to solidify the education and to prepare me for when I transfer to the University of California, Berkeley. I might be interested in studying astrophysics today, but I am uncertain what my goal will be in the future. Like the infinitely evolving universe, I may change course and become something I never knew existed. I don’t know what my life will be like twenty years from now; all I know is that I will do my best to push myself so that I get the best out of every experience.

1 comment:

  1. I'm in the same boat as you. I want to study Chemical Engineering but I'm not sure if I'll change my mind later on.. Anyways, I liked your essay. We'll figure it out later on!

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